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Post by shadow on Apr 24, 2010 13:08:53 GMT -5
Species: Eurasian wolf Gender: Male *Sexuality: Straight Name: Tait Williams Age: 3 Birth Month: January 9th. Birth Place: Between the Glacial pass and the Dancing lights forest. Pack: N.a Rank: Loner Current Thread(s):N.a
Height: 34 inches Weight: 137 pounds Build: Large Eye Color: light grey-yellow mix Hair/Fur/Feather Color(s): Three shades of dull tan. Fur Texture/Length: mid length. Accessories: N.a Over-all Description: He is big and strongly built. A lot of built muscle as a runner. One ear has a bit of hearing loss to it and he tends not to use it often, instead it has a somewhat of a tilt. His ear can often make him look very easy going or carefree. He only really takes it out of its relaxed state when he has quite strong emotions. Tait is a mix of tans, taken into three shades. Base: The lightest of the shades, it makes up all of his fur that remains uncolored. Darkest: Making a marking around his eye . This color also tips his ears, two symmetrical spots, on over each eye, and almost his full underbelly. Midtone: This tone is the color of his inner ear. Patches under each eye and is a transition between his darkest tone and his base tone. Also Tait's nose is a grey-pink with some speckled black on it. He had a set of light yellow-grey mixed eyes.
Over-All Personality: Usually a calm, easy going wolf, though when baited he can sometimes snap. He only tends to do this at high emotional moments or when very confused, otherwise he seems very neutral. Seldom shares his emotions to others (He is not emo, he just doesn't see it necessarily needed.) Tait is a good listener, that doesn't tend to offer advice or question others thoughts, or actions. He is known for seeing everything in a sense of a game where everyone is a piece, including himself, trying to get as far as they can. Personality Quirks: Quiet but when he talks he can be knowledgeable. Fears: - Rock slides - Claustrophobic - Being Maimed Ambitions/Goals: Get as far as he can in the "game" of life. Likes: Listening, running, and on occasion play fighting. Dislikes: Those who don't understand their place, those who don't play fair. Anyone who doesn't earn their rank.
Mother: N.a, Pup sitter Father: N.a, Beta Brother(s): N.a Sister(s): N.a Friends: N.a Enemies: N.a Attraction(s): N.a Mate/Preferred Partner: N.a
History:
Tait was raised in a strict pack. Their laws and rules were harsh, to a point lower ranks were not permitted to speak most of the time. His mother was a highly regarded Pup sitter and his father the pack Beta. His father most likely the one that had most effect on his life. Though to him, Tait would have just been one of the packs pups to teach. Since the beta and Alpha’s bloodlines ran through most of the pups for at least four years worth of litters, Tait wasn’t really paid attention to. He would spend his days learning about the pack’s rules laws and anything else the elders could think of. And his evenings with his year mates training his fighting skills. As he got older, he was deemed almost ready for his rite of passage into his pack. A test to see how strong a wolf was. He passed with average marks in fighting and hunting as well as being the best in his year at running. Tait was posted as a young messenger in the pack, but his fathers words stood frozen in his mind. He rose to one of the best messengers in the pack, this is where his listening and relaying ability comes in. His father had said to all the pups at their first meeting with him that life was like a game, and the further you got the better off you could be. These words were the reason he left his pack at about a year and a half. Moving around in search of a better start. A head start in the game was why he looked to find a pack just starting. He didn’t want to start his own, cause what challenge did an alpha have in getting higher. A shock hit him when he realised most packs were free speaking packs, making him question his old packs ways, finding he would have much to learn when it came to pack laws and regulations.
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Post by Candle on Apr 24, 2010 21:39:16 GMT -5
Thanks for applying, Shad! I just need you to make a few edits and then I can accepted you. Please check your sentence structure and try to make more complete sentences. And remember to capitalize pronouns like 'Dancing Light Forest'.
Sorry for having to do this to a friend but... I can't show favoritism or else people will lyk ttly flaym me and stuff. :<
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Post by shadow on Apr 24, 2010 22:58:40 GMT -5
Its ok I understand completely but can you tell me which places the sentences are missing? The program I was typing on eats things at times. = = Like full sentences which i have to retype.
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Post by Candle on Apr 30, 2010 22:50:25 GMT -5
Actually, I read the comments on Taits profile on Mirage and the things she said are basically the same things I did.. mostly. Whatever. Just make the same changes here you made there and I can accept ya.
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Post by shadow on May 30, 2010 15:21:41 GMT -5
Ok, first off, thats really unprofessional of you. Your bringing in another site not to mention a moderator's words that doesn't even moderate here into a bio on your site. Secondly, since you obviously didn't notice. This bio is the same as the one on Mirage, with the bonus of me taking the places and necessary additions and substitutions into account for this being a different forum. This bio was done the same time that I did the now accepted bio on Mirage.
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Post by Candle on Jun 16, 2010 21:42:45 GMT -5
; O..kay... Accepted.
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