Whey
Unknown
Posts: 11
|
Post by Whey on Sept 23, 2011 13:57:29 GMT -5
Name: Taelia. Age: three. Species: canis lupus. Gender: female. Sexuality: heterosexual. Birth Month: January. Birth Place: Glacial Pass. Pack and Rank: loner. Current Thread(s): none.
Appearance: With a standard build, the most striking thing about Taelia appearance-wise would be her incredibly blue eyes, which are almost hypnotizing against her stark black coat, which is broken up only by light grey of her muzzle and front left paw. Height: thirty three inches. Weight: seventy eight pounds. Build: standard size, a little on the heavy side. Eye Color: blue. Fur Color: black. Fur Texture/Length: soft, thick, medium length fur. Accessories: tracking collar.
Personality: Taelia is a very blunt and stubborn character, and also very opinionated. She tells it like it is and can, at times, be quite cocky. However, despite the general 'toughness' of her personality, she is a nurturer at heart and generally very motherly. She can also be quite imaginative at times and enjoys telling stories to young pups. Ambitions/Goals: join a pack. Fears: thunderstorms. Likes: snow. pups. sun. Dislikes: cloudy days. marshy areas. filthiness.
History: Months before Taelia was born, her father set out on a hunting expedition to gather food to bring home for Taelia's mother. The morning sun transformed into the moon and he still was not yet back. Days turned into weeks and Taelia's mother excepted the sad fact that he would not be returning before finally giving birth to three healthy pups in the Glacial Pass.
Taelia's mother had found a rocky den in which to raise her and her two siblings and they stayed rooted to the far reaches of Glacial Pass near the mountains. Taelia was always extremely close to her mother and was always distraught whenever she set out in search of food or to mark their territory. This extremely close bond with her mother helped to develop her nurturing and motherly behaviour.
When it came time to leave the den and her mother, Taelia was distraught. She did not want to leave her mother alone, and was increasingly worried about her health. However, Taelia's mother pushed her three offspring and she reluctantly left along with her two brothers. They stayed together for a short time, forming a rogue pack, until her eldest born brother set off on his own path, followed shortly thereafter by her other brother, the youngest born of the family, leaving her to tend to her own devices. She has been wandering Glacial Pass, and the mountains, ever since in hopes of finding other wolves in which to congregate.
Sometime on her lonely journey, she was shot in her leg shortly after noticing a sour odor in the air which could only belong to humans. she then became heavily fatigued and fell asleep for quite some time. When she awoke, she was back in Glacial Pass and had a strange object fitted around her neck.
Mother: silverleaf. Father: unknown. Brother(s): kingsblood, viper. Sister(s): none. Other Family Members: unknown. Friends: none. Acquaintances: none. Enemies: none. Attraction(s): none. Mate: none.
|
|
|
Post by Candle on Sept 24, 2011 22:21:14 GMT -5
Usually I don't allow super-duper blue eyes because its really unrealistic for wolves, but you seem to be able to handle her specialness well.
I can accept you as soon as you do ONE thing for me; capitalize the beginning of sentences and pronouns like names. Also, you add words where words are not needed sometimes, like "and", or place in extra commas. That's fine for now, but we should work together on that later.
For instance, this...
"when it came time to leave the den, and her mother, taelia was distraught. she did not want to leave her mother alone, and was increasingly worried about her health. however, taelia's mother pushed her three offspring and taelia reluctantly left along with her two brothers."
Should be like this:
"When it came time to leave the den and her mother, Taelia was distraught. She did not want to leave her mother alone, and was increasingly worried about her health. However, Taelia's mother pushed her three offspring and taelia she reluctantly left along with her two brothers."
Once your done with that, just capitalize your username and you can start role-playing. Don't even wait for me to say "accepted" x3.
|
|
|
Post by Candle on Sept 25, 2011 18:11:35 GMT -5
Sexified! Accepted. ^-^
|
|